Lady Pirate

At first I was thinking: don't tell us...show us! But then I got the end, I didn't want you to show me, I wanted you to tell me, so that ...

To me this poem lacks emotion, and to me a poem that has death in the first line should evoke emotion. The word death by itself should be enough to ...

You have a desent start here. Your have a great title, that's why i looked at it in the first place. --First thing first, work on your spacing, it will ...

Okay: The note at the top of page in bold needs to go by-by. If you have time to write that out, and put it in bold, you have time ...

First thing first, you have a great start here, but I almost didn't read it becuase you said: kind of a slow start, but it'll speed up. Don't tell us ...

This is a very good start, I am very intrested in seeing what happed to her family, only only complaint is this: edge of the cliff, where rocks tumbled down ...

This is really good, I couldn't peel my eyes off the computer screen. I love the parallel with Salem and all those people dying during the Salem Witch Trails, it's ...

I like this, it is short, sweet, simple and to the point. I love the Shh at the beginning. It's almost as if, there is a lot of noise around ...

To me and the book and the movie bring two differnt things to the table. The movie consentrates on the events for towards the end of the book, if I ...

I loved this book was very good, the fast pace, the quick and witty writing, and page turner. When I first read it last year I could not put it ...

Yes, My French Friend, it is good. I got extra credit for reading it in Mrs. Cribbs HA Bio class. The sequal to it is very good as well, but ...

I loves these books, Everyones doesn now that the new one: EXTRAS is coming out this fall right? You can check out his websit for details.... Here is the URL ...

I love these books, and I'm very stoked about the next one. Normally when there are two books, I enjoy one for the than the other, and I could tell ...

My teacher in Lit. Mag, and I where just having is argument fri. He doesn't like our generation's poems, says they're too straight forwards, and there are no literary componates ...

I feel a lack of emotion, for instance, your talking about something be fatal, as in deadly (I'm assuming) how does that make you feel, how do you want to ...